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Kibsy's Poem writing has finally returned!!
#1
I wrote this sometime last month it isn't much but its the first i managed to write in a long time
The Helper
I let myself got overwhelmed again
With everyone else’s problems
I take others problems and rest then on my shoulders
I can’t help this though
There is only one way I’ll be able stop
This is who I am
I try and help others anyway that I can
Helping others makes my hope stronger
My hope that there is someone out there
Who will want to help me
Who will make it all better
Make everything feel right
Repair it all back together
These other problems may not be mine to bear
Although they may cause me to fall into the depths of despair
I will continue to take them head on
I will help fight them with all that I’ve got
While I wait for the one person
Who can help me fight my true burdens
All those things I have buried deep down inside
So please let me help you
The more I help the quicker he’ll come
Let me help you
I can feel him, he’ll be here soon
He is coming to help the helper
He is coming to save me
#2
Let it be
The feeling is beginning to creep
To spread itself all over me
The feeling of doom, of darkness
Has begun to surround me
The feeling that the bad is coming
Is travelling through every part of me
That feeling which I could no longer stand
Has decided to bury me deep in the ground once again
And I’m going to let it
I have decided to stick by this feeling
Because I know it will always return
I can always expect the same thing every time
The only constant
In my life where everything changes
Where I have been left broken
When conversations seem to end in a fight
When everything seems to end before it begins
I’m going to hold onto the numbness
And keep it close at hand
That way I’ll never disappointed
That way I won’t expect
Anymore then I actually get
#3
deep but very good
#4
really? thanks scarps... heh have another one but i don't think it is quite right yet but anyways...

We can only hope
She loves you
We love you
I love you
They all say this
But what do they actually mean
They are all just three word phrases

Phrases which no longer
Seem to mean anything when heard
Though it means so much more when spoken
When the words ‘love you’ are said
It is not for the benefit of the listener
But for the one who is saying it

Stop it! With all these lies
Only ever say it
If you really truly mean it
Only ever say it
If it helps the one you love
More then it helps you

Remember,
That four letter word is forever
Don’t go wasting your word
On those you know don’t really deserve it
If you don’t love them don’t say it
Then hopefully

Less pain
Less betrayal
Less discomfort
More love
More truth
Will come from this
#5
heres another one...


Don't Care
Another sleepless night
Another lonely day
You are so near by
Yet so far away

I need you here
I want you here
Buy you’re not here
Cause you don’t care

Another empty night
Another useless day
You have taken all of me
You have let me disappear

I needed you
I wanted you
You weren’t there
Cause you didn’t care

Another cold night
Another dark day
You will be back
You will be here

I needed you there
I wanted you there
You weren’t there then
Cause you never cared

I finally slept tonight
Today was a warm day
You were so close by
Yet I didn’t care

I don’t want you here
I don’t need you here
You say you need me
But I don’t really care
#6
the first one sounded a little more philosophic but the second one was great
#7
yeah i think i sounded like an angry teacher... but oh well... atleast i got my point across... i really like the last one though i actually enjoyed writing it... in a weird way it felt like pay back... XD
#8
lol, i will have to do some more poems, and then i shall call myself poem master, XD
#9
or maybe poet XD... lol you gots any ideas??...
#10
not yet, but all i have to do is think of something and it'll come, hehe it may even be a funnyor weird poem like that tree one i did, XD


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